| No Numbers or Metrics | "Increased sales" doesn't show magnitude. Employers can't gauge your impact. | Quantify: "Increased territory sales by 45% to $3.2M" |
| Generic Responsibilities | "Responsible for lead generation" reads like a job description, not an achievement. | "Generated 500+ qualified leads annually, resulting in $2M pipeline" |
| Missing CRM/Platform Names | Employers want to know which specific tools you can use immediately. | List specific platforms: Salesforce, HubSpot, Marketo, etc. |
| Vague Funnel Understanding | Not showing knowledge of where you fit in the revenue cycle. | Demonstrate funnel awareness: top-of-funnel, middle, bottom |
| Activity-Focused, Not Results-Focused | "Made 50 calls per day" shows activity, not impact. | "50 calls/day generated 15 meetings and $500K in pipeline" |
| Omitting Sales Methodology | Not mentioning MEDDIC, Challenger, or SPIN suggests lack of formal training. | "Used MEDDIC framework to qualify enterprise opportunities" |
| Listing Duties Instead of Wins | Recruiters scan for achievements, not job descriptions. | Lead with results: 'Achieved 130% of quota for 5 consecutive quarters' |
| No Deal Size or Sales Cycle Context | Without context, numbers lose meaning for hiring managers. | "Closed 15 deals averaging $150K with 6-month sales cycle" |